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Now with a Relationship Edition. Want to know what Lemony thinks of you?

[Over the years Lemony has stayed mainly the same. He however is more open to friends and has gotten closer to the few he's made here. For the most part though, he's the same mournful and quiet man he always was. However today he sounds panicked as he grabs for the phone]


Hello...hello? There's....something....something terribly dreadful seems to have happend.

There's....a body..

[A gulp]

Oh dear lord, A body is hanging from my porch....light. A body...

[There's a pause as he draws a shaky breath]

I...I just thought I should  let people know...

[Yes he is emotionally rattled and yes he may be crying and yes he really hates this place]

[EDIT: The body in question belongs to Alphonse Elric. Lemony has never meet the young man so he has no idea if it's a drone or not...what with him being dead.]

[He's picked up and put down the phone a few times before actualling deciding to ask this question]

I know it is most unlikely but would anyone know a store that might sell a Menorah?

For those who are unaware, a menorah is a nine branched candelabrum that holds special significance to those of the Jewish religion.

Well it appears as though the fires caused no lasting damage.

I suppose that is all for the best. Though the fact that we seem to have no fire department could be cause for concern. In normal circumstances I would most likely sugest forming a volunteer ...department of some type. However I doubt very much that would be successful here.

[There is a deep sigh, after he believes he's put the phone away]

Why did it have to be fire?...

Oh dear, first fire, power outage and now...[He finds the phone is still working] How odd...

Does anyone in this town know a Ms.Riza Hawkeye? If you do, please contact me. I...I have something you should know.

[Is gazing down at the flames of City Hall. He HATES fire.]

What-

Where is the fire department? Don't they realize what is taking place? I...I swore I saw one....This is just terrible!

[A deep sigh as he stares still and mumers without realizing it]

The world is certainly not quiet here.

[Lemony is currently out for a walk and is carrying a notepad that he seems to be drawing in as he goes. He stops here and there writing things down along the way.

If you see him you may notice that every so often he seems to glance down at one of his ankles with an odd expression.]